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       作者:范素琴 | 发布者:范素琴  | 时间:2020-03-29 15:42:52  | 学段:初中  | 学科:英语 | 上下册:上册

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话题写作

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Dear Sir/ Madam,

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. With the development of the society, there are too many cars on the streets in our city. Cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe. Black smoke is given off by factories. Factories also put waste into the river. And wherever we go, we can find rubbish.

Now more and more people have realized these problems. I think that governments Should close down factories and develop laws to stop people from driving cars every day. I suggest everyone in our city should help to clean up the river and the streets. We should call on everyone to throw rubbish in the dustbins.

   I hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better.

Yours’

Writing

保护环境,人人有责’,针对日益严重的大气污染问题,请你给呼图壁县环保局长写一封80-100词左右的信,谈谈引起大气污染的原因和保护环境的具体措施 (至少3) 以及你的愿望。

要求:1.先完成下列思维导图中的写作框架。

     2.所写内容包含所提供信息,可适当发挥.

可供参考: recycle  reduce  throw ... into...  save...   We’d better...  I suggest that...  It’s helpful to...

First of all  Besides  At last...     In my opinion...   As for me...

Group Workcomplete the mind map               


  Beginning(Fact& cause     ccause )           ) 
                                                                                     Fact:


                                             cause :



    


                                           1.________________________________________


  Body(  suggestions)                ) 

  Air pollution 
                                         2.________________________________________


      3.________________________________________

                                         4.________________________________________

                                         5.________________________________________

  Ending( Hope &     Wishes ) 

                                        




Hope: If ..., we can ...                             


 

 

Dear sir/madam,

Nowadays, the problems of air pollution in Hutubi become worse and worse .More and more people begin to pay attention to the environment. So, it’s our duty to protect our environment.

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In my opinion, we should play a part in saving the earth. Let’s take actions at once!

 

温馨提示:
1. 语义合情合理,过渡自然(适当使用逻辑词);                  2.语句有简有繁,随而安(忌长句);
3.
语法结构正确,规范三写(大小写,拼写,书写);          4. 时态,人称一致, 语言地道流畅。

 

 


互动评论

  • 姬晓灵(发表于 2020/4/9 12:09:10)

    good

  • 赵玉娜(发表于 2020/4/2 12:44:38)

    写作步骤清晰。范文有示范性。

  • 袁晓翠(发表于 2020/3/31 20:14:57)

    对话题作文归纳细致,提供的模板非常实用

  • 吴海青(发表于 2020/3/31 17:11:01)

    这个范文简短,但是能够围绕中心,使用常见句,对中下层学生很有帮助